yes and no
yeah i gotta give this some points because of the acid:D i like.
but the drum pattern sounded kind of weird, i mean i see what you're trying to do but it's not really flowing. and it's too loud in relation with the rest.
and then my brain freezed
Yay, I like acid probably as much as you do, the assaultcube samples cant really stand on their own, so i just had to add something to make it sound more "full" and glitchy drum was the solution
youre doing it wrong
okay it didn't start off too bad, but then the bass kicks in.
the bass sounds waaaay too distorted and unclear, yet its driving away everything else, like the drums, which not flowing very well. Maybe turning the volume of the 2nd snare down, and putting an EQ on the drums... for starters.
some of the synths you used, cant really here them well, arent too bad.
the melody on the end was kind of childish.
how long did you take making this man, like 3 minutes:P cant hear effort in this anywhere.
its supposed to sound childish, the melodies are from 2 german child-songs.
it took me a while but in the end i distortioned it everything so it got that unclear.. and it is also supposed to be that unclear and distortioned, there are in total around 4-5 EQ's lol
thanks for the review
like a masterpiece
i just heard your other song you posted along with this one, which was good, but this.. gotta agree this is amazing. Like your style man, very emotional.
The voices are great, the drums(nice hard clap), the snare rolls, the melodies... Just perfect, 10/10.
i got a christmas vibe
with the bells and shit:P
no i get what kind of emotions you wanna get across and it's working.
good job on the drums, it's like trance vs hiphop.
did like the softer lead better than the main one. if you get what i mean. maybe you should look into the melody, get them together a bit more.
it's got a full sound to it, but not enough different sounds. Maybe if you'd get some vocals, that should solve it right away.
liked the silence you dropped in just like that at 1.35. Kicks back in hard.
Du du duu...
I know exactly what you mean ^^
The previous version had vocal samples in it. and the softer lead was mixed with the main one, no kicks, and louder march drums. so it was good to hear but not good to record on...so I modified it to best fit the lyrics I'm bout to record.
Thanks for the feedback check out The Life I Live that I also submitted today.
ding ding ding
got a progressive feel to it. i like it, im chillin out over here man.
nice job on the bass, fat and flowing.
like the melody aswell, some happy feelgood ding-donging but i like it.
personally think it doesnt need lyrics. sounds full enough to me.
anyway, if this is a first go, you still did a pretty friggen good job man. i can hear it somewhere though, i guess there's not alot of really original effects or breaks or patterns you're using.
but if you'd dive deep into the genre you might have a few masterpieces comin out your fruity pooper. i mean looper. or loops. riiight...
yeah good
haha that beat drops like a sledgehammer.
gotta say i was expecting some brutal shit but then you brought this happy tune in.
not really the kind of thing i enjoy but i'm not rating on personal taste. it's a good melody standing strong in there, i can hear that alright.
nice job on this one.
im not really getting which hardstyle vocal you mean, im hearing this weak female choir somewhere backing it up at the end, is that what you mean? because that doesnt seem out of place to me
Well i think i was thiking about another file :S yer but that one is out of tune :L oh well glad you liked it :)
-Dreadnought106
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not really the kind of thing to get down to, more something to be sitting on a bench to and gazing at the wonders of the world and its beatiful colours, and, not to forget, moving walls:P
the beat sounds a bit understated though.
the main lead sounds a bit videogameish, agree with the guy before me on that, but its cool nonetheless, complex melody and everything. the whole thing just fits.
pretty much awesome music. luminous and foxy.
beautiful symphony
yeah this would work well in a movie, maybe even a video game, probably at the point that the world is crumbling down or something.
you're right it does flow into each other very good, some beatiful elements in it with the flute for instance. lot of gravity on this one:P
it all forms an unity, complex melodies here and there... like the piano..
abrupt ending though. planning to make a longer version? it definetely deserves that.
here comes the critic
i like the bass you used, the beat, which is basic but hard, with the rides n shit..
few problems i believe im hearing though.
it just jumps from the one thing to the other thing just like that sometimes.
while other times you really had some strong transitions. hmm.
and the trumpet march is completely irrelevant to anything in this song man:P
same goes for the strings that go with em in the start. and after that it just jumps to a completely different melody.. thats what i mean.
but if you think its perfect... matter of taste i guess.
the main tune is nice and uplifting, gotta give you that, bit to loud maybe, thats technical shit im not gonna bitch about that now:P
so overall its definetely worth some points.
thnx 4 your comment!
I'll try to let my next songs sound better with better transitions ;-)
have you listened my other songs already?
Ace
i remember i used to love this song, especially the noisia remix.. it was just crying for a dubstep remix!
nice beat here, only i was hoping for a complete turn-around when the beat drops, just like in the original.. here the tune just keeps going.
apart from that i gotta say i love it.
the bass sounds alot like the original thing, its got that stadium sound to it but raw as fuck at the same time.
keep working on this one man, could be big.
and oh, if you're not going to include the "AAAAAAAH" in the full version i will personally come to you and put your head on a stick.
jk.. or am i?
of you could find that AAAH i would have agressive sex to you:O
but yeah i could maybe throw a little difference in the breakdown
great idea actually
anyways thanks for an awesome review
nouen
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